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Piano-kun, 17 May 2008 11:01 pm
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Geez, FINALLY. I almost forgot I had a main character. XD; I really need to work out the story’s pacing better in the next chapter…
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Nashira, 17 May 2008 11:03 pm
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YaaY! I love your art. >////< I can't wait for more! This is interesting...<3
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CharonDragon, 18 May 2008 01:08 am
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the pacing is fine, the only reason it seems odd is because we get it in one week (or more) incrimints. in a normal manga this would be fine.
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BBQ Bert (Guest), 18 May 2008 12:39 pm
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I love R-ko! I absolutely adore him! He's such a fun character. He's all jolly and nonchalant before, and now it's all like, "Aww, poo. Consequences." I love that!
I like how this story is moving forward, actually. The pacing is off at all. It's flowing very smoothly!
Keep up the awesome work, because it's coming along great!
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Megaman0, 19 May 2008 10:04 am
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The pacing is fine, the way I see it is that most new action or comedy manga's get a first chapter that consists out of 40 pages before they start running weekly chapters of 15-20 pages or monthly chapters that run from 20-40.
If you go by that(which you might as well do since you use the same genre), then your intro period is right on schedule...that's the reasoning I use with S12ord :P
The only other thing you can do is change your style of writing which I wouldn't recommend I learned that it's better to focus on telling your own story instead of thinking what might be wrong with it.
Anyways I'm glad we get to see a new update ;)
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