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Chiri-chan (Guest), 21 Dec 2007 04:53 pm
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o_o
Oh dear...o_o'
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Kaycie (Guest), 21 Dec 2007 06:23 pm
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Hahah, I just read up until here... great job so far! It all looks very professionally done, and I love your characters already x333
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faerietear, 21 Dec 2007 10:50 pm
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awesome page :D
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GabrielsThoughts, 22 Dec 2007 12:05 am
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I agree your art is awesome and the concept seems interesting,I'm going to add you to my favorites, and check up on this when you have at least 30 more pages.
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4verme (Guest), 22 Dec 2007 02:11 am
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WOW!
It's cute and I like how it started,
I can't wait to see more~ XD
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Lira (Guest), 22 Dec 2007 10:38 am
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Wow, you're doing great so far!!! Too bad the screen tones seem to get messed up when you shrink the pages... but it's still such an awesome job!!
I'll keep on reading you ;D
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sasurai gekko, 22 Dec 2007 11:44 pm
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<3 Spiffy :D +fav
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Evil Kitty (Guest), 24 Dec 2007 11:42 am
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Hey there!
Well, I don't know where to start, lol. You have a very nice comic, I might think it's aimed at kids though...Or am I wrong? I like your coloring, it's very simple and anime-like, you've also done a decent job with the toning. Your pannels are very clear and easy to follow, but I think that the the story is too predictable; as in the reader already knows what's going to happen next.But maybe you chose to do it that way on purpose, I don't know, but it seems a little bland to me. Don't take me wrong though! I like it, keep up the good work.
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Akatsuki_Dragon_, 06 Mar 2008 11:54 am
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definetly @fav-
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